Lexicon Trailer: Second Cut

With this second cut I have introduced my soundtrack for the trailer, this has already made a big improvement from my first cut, it certainly creates the right mood and atmosphere that follow the conventions of a trailer and my cross-genre.
There are scenes where I have shortened the dialogue so that the key parts of the plot are more apparent.  The dialogue is a very important part of narrative to explain the plot, it works alongside the captions shown on screen
I have remaining scenes to shoot which will be done in due course, it is difficult to tell how well this trailer win end up because of these gaps, however from editing the clips together as they are it is easier for me to decide upon what scenes to film next.
I have noticed that the transition in to the CCTV footage is not correct, I noticed that there were white boarders appearing, this is something I will now be able to change.
Some of the other transitions need to be re-adjusted.
I've noticed that there are part throughout the trailer where the dialogue is not load enough because the soundtrack is too loud and over powering.
The scenes toward the end need to be re-arranged, other scenes need to be introduced to follow the conventions of a trailer, the pace must build as the finale montage takes place, this will then need to cut out to silence and calm, for effect.